Please make your narrative in active voice. It will engage the reader and pump up the pacing.
My students have been struggling with using active voice in their writing. For some reason, they have learned along the way that passive voice sounds more “grown up” or academic.
This may have been true at one time, but in the 21st century, using active voice in academic research writing is not only appropriate, it is preferable, at least if you follow APA Style (6th edition, p. 77).
Students who never learned grammar struggle to identify the difference between passive and active voice.
One way to figure out if it is passive or active voice is to ask “Who dunnit?” In passive voice, it is a mystery. We never know who did the action.
In active voice, there’s no mystery. The person, people, animal(s) or things that did the action are always identifiable.
Example #1: “The man was murdered.”
Question: By whom? (“Who dunnit”?)
Answer: We have no idea…
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